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review my design: Recent Posts http://reviewmydesign.net/ your designs reviewed by designers en Thu, 11 Mar 2010 07:09:03 +0000 KmacK on "Metal Box" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=637#post-3467 Mon, 08 Mar 2010 14:10:28 +0000 KmacK 3467@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hi,   I would like some feedback on this design.  I submited it to TF and I was declined.  What should I do to improve it?  Any help would be  appreciated.   Here is the link: <a href="http://jirkdesigns.com/demo/themeforest/metalbox">MetalBox</a> gljivec on "SilverLite" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=636#post-3466 Sat, 06 Mar 2010 17:04:44 +0000 gljivec 3466@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hi, &nbsp; I would just like some comments on what you think is done well and what isn't. &nbsp; Thanks kdanielku on "LeBlanc Press" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=635#post-3465 Fri, 05 Mar 2010 14:18:15 +0000 kdanielku 3465@http://reviewmydesign.net/ hi, my main idea for that design was the layout of an Newspaper or Magazine.... I work on this template since yesterday and thought it needs some improvements... or maybe a lot of improvements I don't know what to say more than that... I think it needs also more features... &nbsp; first I want to make the main shapes before I start with the details and the sub-pages &nbsp; thanks a lot Lovi on "Real Estate logo" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=247#post-3464 Fri, 05 Mar 2010 10:54:47 +0000 Lovi 3464@http://reviewmydesign.net/ I think too, the best is the secund one. Easy to read, and the key points to meanin. On the fitst picture the O more likely an I ant it's grammatically wrong :) Lovi on "Sky template" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=634#post-3463 Fri, 05 Mar 2010 10:48:56 +0000 Lovi 3463@http://reviewmydesign.net/ This template will need significant improvements in one or more of these areas before it will be ready... Any idea? This is a business template. Lovi on "Sky template" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=633#post-3462 Fri, 05 Mar 2010 10:15:26 +0000 Lovi 3462@http://reviewmydesign.net/ This template will need significant improvements in one or more of these areas before it will be ready... Any idea? This is a business template. khashmi on "Professional Resume" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=632#post-3461 Tue, 02 Mar 2010 05:19:13 +0000 khashmi 3461@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Theme forest rejected it. &lt;img src="file:///C:/DOCUME~1/kashif/LOCALS~1/Temp/moz-screenshot.png" alt="" /&gt; URL: <a href="http://www.esolvz.com/resume2/white_theme/index.html" rel="nofollow">http://www.esolvz.com/resume2/white_theme/index.html</a> khashmi on "Professional Resume" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=631#post-3460 Tue, 02 Mar 2010 05:17:10 +0000 khashmi 3460@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Themeforest rected this item. URL: <a href="http://www.esolvz.com/resume2/black_theme/" rel="nofollow">http://www.esolvz.com/resume2/black_theme/</a> dan9408 on "Usability 99. - One page CV/Résumé Template" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=630#post-3459 Mon, 01 Mar 2010 17:56:15 +0000 dan9408 3459@http://reviewmydesign.net/       <pre style="text-align: left;">Usability 99 is a simple, attractive, and usable one page CV/resume theme. This theme is built to the dimensions of 960px, giving it a structured and professional look and the theme features a massive collection of social networking icons.     The Site: 5 Color StylesMassive Social Networking icon pack (from Komodo Media)Contact FormjQuery Smooth ScrollingLightbox script for nice picture pop-upsTooltips demo at my site:<a title="click here" href="http://demo.djgraphics.co.uk/Usability99/"> <a href="http://demo.djgraphics.co.uk/Usability99/" rel="nofollow">http://demo.djgraphics.co.uk/Usability99/</a></a> akle8 on "GrungeFolio" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=629#post-3458 Mon, 01 Mar 2010 11:32:09 +0000 akle8 3458@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hello. I submitted this design to themeforest, but it's rejected. I have message from reviewer: 1) Your template has a good start but, as we have high standards, you will need to make some additional improvements in overall aesthetics and aspects such as typography, graphics, and spacing. 2) Overall template typography needs additional refinements and improvements before it will be ready for Theme Forest. 3) The template needs improvements in visual hierarchy primarily using typographic elements such as headings.   What can I change? :-)   sahilcmr on "iQlizo- 3 in 1 - Professional" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=627#post-3457 Sat, 27 Feb 2010 06:26:06 +0000 sahilcmr 3457@http://reviewmydesign.net/ I agree with what you told..   But.. with that simple reason why they reject my design ??   I took much hard to do it !   Its in 3 Colours. And fully coded!! Yaeko on "Pulse" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=628#post-3456 Fri, 26 Feb 2010 23:57:54 +0000 Yaeko 3456@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hi! &nbsp; I'm creating a new Site-Template that I'm going to submit to Themeforest. Would like to know what you guys think so far? &nbsp; Thanks :) amberturner on "Free CSS Redesign" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=622#post-3455 Wed, 24 Feb 2010 18:35:35 +0000 amberturner 3455@http://reviewmydesign.net/ The search in the header is in an awkward place and you don't really have much of a footer. Also some type of visual separations between those four areas in the middle of the page wouldn't hurt either. amberturner on "Mosaica 8in1 One page html5 portfolio" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=626#post-3454 Wed, 24 Feb 2010 18:33:39 +0000 amberturner 3454@http://reviewmydesign.net/ To me it sounds like you didn't have good documentation and a well coded file.   Your design also needs a footer.   It would help if the image was a bit bigger so we can see it. amberturner on "iQlizo- 3 in 1 - Professional" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=627#post-3453 Wed, 24 Feb 2010 18:30:40 +0000 amberturner 3453@http://reviewmydesign.net/ I agree with the posting above.  The content area needs work on font size and line length (line spacing wouldn't hurt either).  Also, the latest news just seems to be floating there with nothing really to help contain it.  It feels really airy. Good work. FutureKode on "iQlizo- 3 in 1 - Professional" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=627#post-3452 Wed, 24 Feb 2010 16:33:01 +0000 FutureKode 3452@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hello,   I don't know the reasons why your design was rejected but I see at least two things that could make this design better:   1) Change the font of the content.. I don't know what font that is but it's not very appealing, try some different fonts and sizes. 2) Put more content in latest news and push contact us in line with Our Services sahilcmr on "TopApp" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=587#post-3451 Wed, 24 Feb 2010 11:46:39 +0000 sahilcmr 3451@http://reviewmydesign.net/ I know you're trying to make it standard, but .. just a review.. it should be standard worth a little bit of contect would be nice.   Your design have no content at all. sahilcmr on "iQlizo- 3 in 1 - Professional" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=627#post-3450 Wed, 24 Feb 2010 11:10:15 +0000 sahilcmr 3450@http://reviewmydesign.net/ iQlizo is a professional theme by Star Designz. iQlizo consists of: 1) Available in 3 different colours. 2) Clean Fading Image Slider 3) Clean & Professional Header Style 4) Contact in Sidebar 5) Clean Footer with Navigation 6) Editable Navigation 7) Transparent Nav.bar background 8) Flexible Header Background and much more!! FutureKode on "Mosaica 8in1 One page html5 portfolio" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=626#post-3449 Wed, 24 Feb 2010 08:12:36 +0000 FutureKode 3449@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Message from envato support This file requires significant improvements or alterations in order to be considered for sale on ThemeForest. Thank you for your understanding.   ThemeForest requires a well designed template with valid code and proper documentation for approval. This template will need significant improvements in one or more of these areas before it will be ready for ThemeForest.   This was my first submission to themeforest. I guess it needs to have a logo. and some of the skins could be better. any ideas?   Item description Mosaica 8in1 One page html5 portfolio   Features <ul> <li>Valid html5</li> <li>8 themes included: <a>http://futurekode.com/envato/themeforest/mosaica/yellow/</a></li> <li><a>http://futurekode.com/envato/themeforest/mosaica/orange/</a></li> <li><a>http://futurekode.com/envato/themeforest/mosaica/gold/</a></li> <li><a>http://futurekode.com/envato/themeforest/mosaica/green</a></li> <li><a>http://futurekode.com/envato/themeforest/mosaica/white/</a></li> <li><a>http://futurekode.com/envato/themeforest/mosaica/blue/</a></li> <li><a>http://futurekode.com/envato/themeforest/mosaica/purple/</a></li> <li><a>http://futurekode.com/envato/themeforest/mosaica/red/</a></li> <li>custom animated menu</li> <li>jquery quicksand filter for work items</li> <li>jquery overlay</li> <li>contact form validation</li> </ul> Miraj on "TopApp" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=587#post-3448 Wed, 24 Feb 2010 01:31:24 +0000 Miraj 3448@http://reviewmydesign.net/ I completely agree with what wrerm said. I also feel that the featured part (Blue part) of the webpage is too big. Lower that height of that section. There should be a better transition from the feature section to the one underneath it. Maybe a little shadow on top? khashmi on "Resume" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=624#post-3446 Tue, 23 Feb 2010 11:46:45 +0000 khashmi 3446@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Unfortunately, due to our high standards, your template has been declined. ThemeForest requires a well designed template with valid code and proper documentation for approval. This template will need significant improvements in one or more of these areas before it will be ready for ThemeForest. &nbsp; You can view : <a href="http://www.esolvz.com/resume" rel="nofollow">http://www.esolvz.com/resume</a> lickynee on "New Template Design" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=620#post-3444 Sun, 21 Feb 2010 05:05:56 +0000 lickynee 3444@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hi there,   I like it, clean and simple. There are only a few things I would change: 1. There should be more padding/margin between the "Welcome to the..." and "Lorem ipsum..." 2. I'm not sure why the first post under "Posts" is highlighted.  3. I think it would look better if the padding in the footer were even, as in, the padding-top should be the same as the padding-right/left. 4. Try experimenting with some rounded corners, it all looks a bit squarish. 5. Also try experimenting with some more shadows to add more depth.   Good luck! :) mikka23 on "Madhumethu" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=617#post-3443 Sat, 20 Feb 2010 22:13:25 +0000 mikka23 3443@http://reviewmydesign.net/ I really like it.  Infact I dont see anything I would change. mikka23 on "Free CSS Redesign" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=622#post-3442 Sat, 20 Feb 2010 21:52:25 +0000 mikka23 3442@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hi everyone.  I have been working on a redesign for my website.  Please let me know what you think.  <a title="link" href="http://www.codedpreview.com/folders/h/be9f7968/">Coded preview</a> Yaeko on "Simple Clean CV / Resume" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=621#post-3441 Thu, 18 Feb 2010 09:51:38 +0000 Yaeko 3441@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hi, I've submitted a site template to themeforest, unluckely it got rejected for 2 reasons:   ThemeForest requires a well designed template with valid code and proper documentation for approval. This template will need significant improvements in one or more of these areas before it will be ready for ThemeForest. You might consider taking a look at some of our most popular items to get a better idea for what we're looking for   For the valid code it's already fixed, but I'm not sure for the design? Here is the link <a title="Clean CV" href="http://tfdemos.hy-studio.net/clean_simple_cv">Demo</a> BryanB on "New Template Design" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=620#post-3440 Tue, 16 Feb 2010 20:48:37 +0000 BryanB 3440@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hey Everyone, I'm developing my first themeforest template and looking for some critiques. I right now I'm feeling like the typography is bland and needs work, as well as it feels bland towards the header / slider area. All feedback is welcome, thanks! jcasabona on "Item For Sale" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=619#post-3439 Tue, 16 Feb 2010 15:21:36 +0000 jcasabona 3439@http://reviewmydesign.net/ The Item for Sale page allows you to host your own, well designed for sale page with areas for photos, contact info, and an integrated contact form. A clean, simple design that is easy to navigate, with JQuery Slider for the photos. hawx on "New Themeforest design in need of criticism." http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=604#post-3438 Mon, 15 Feb 2010 13:53:32 +0000 hawx 3438@http://reviewmydesign.net/ The blocks of text are all the same, there's no focus on one main area which sums up the purpose of the whole site. Maybe you could make the first block a larger font size or highlight it in some way. hawx on "Clean Card" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=618#post-3437 Mon, 15 Feb 2010 11:38:29 +0000 hawx 3437@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hi this got rejected from themeforest but I don't think anythings wrong, which is clearly the point you should always get a second opinion. So any thoughts?&nbsp; hawx on "JohnDue - proffesional single page portfolio" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=609#post-3436 Mon, 15 Feb 2010 11:33:27 +0000 hawx 3436@http://reviewmydesign.net/ I think you should make it so that you cannot manually scroll the main area, unless javascript is disabled. And the shadow behind the header text is a bit distracting and messy, I don't think it adds much. But I do like the arrow and the colour choice. Hope this helps! sanndesh on "Madhumethu" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=617#post-3435 Mon, 15 Feb 2010 11:15:37 +0000 sanndesh 3435@http://reviewmydesign.net/ My new creation in making, This is a website of newly opened exclusive homestay at Waynad. Love to hear your reviews. amberturner on "Deep Blue Portfolio/Blog Design" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=614#post-3434 Sun, 14 Feb 2010 19:42:21 +0000 amberturner 3434@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hey there, Nice overall design.   I would concentrate on that 'Front End Development' block as the line length is entirely too long.  I also would work on reducing the copy in the header/slider area (the left part of that area) as none of it really guides my eye to each section because it all seems to be a middle grey in typography terms. The name, email, and message labels on the form is entirely too big. I would also work on margin and padding throughout the site, as everything feels so cramped.  It is ok to give your site a little room to breathe.   cooljeba on "Deep Blue Portfolio/Blog Design" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=614#post-3433 Fri, 12 Feb 2010 05:01:55 +0000 cooljeba 3433@http://reviewmydesign.net/ @kamiyeye Thanks for the suggestion, yes you are right.. I should be more consistent with the padding in the blocks. :)   @Yaeko : that is a nice suggestion. Currently I have kept them as background for all of them. Now I will keep it only while hover :) mav on "Themeforest - Visionary 8 in 1" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=616#post-3432 Thu, 11 Feb 2010 15:57:01 +0000 mav 3432@http://reviewmydesign.net/ Hi, I really need some reviews for this template. <a title="VISIONARY" href="http://www.mattiaviviani.com/works/visionary/preview/dark_blue/">Here the working version</a> Thank you! Yaeko on "Deep Blue Portfolio/Blog Design" http://reviewmydesign.net/topic.php?id=614#post-3431 Thu, 11 Feb 2010 13:41:49 +0000 Yaeko 3431@http://reviewmydesign.net/ I wouldn't use the backgrounds behind the navigation buttons. Instead use those backgrounds when hovering over, or is it the purpose?